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| ¥á¡¼¥ë¥Þ¥¬¥¸¥ó ¥µ¥ó¥×¥ë The Word: *Job* Title: Should Teenagers Work While They Are Still Students? Structure: (1) Introduction (2) There are some bad aspects of teenage students having jobs, but they may trun out to be good respects in the future. (3) Conclusion Example: Fortunately in Japan, most teenage students are not required to work to help support their families, and can devote themselves to their studies. However, some teenagers themselves choose to work after school hours, and earn some pocket money. It is true that teenagers can learn through jobs what they can't learn in school; as an example, they may have to serve impolite and unkind customers, and can begin to understand feelings of workers. On the other hand, lots of harm can be listed for teenagers at work. Overall, I believe it is good for teenage students to work. It seems harmful but in the end, it is good for their future. It is thought to be harmful because it is waste of time that can be spent on study. However, in my opinion, teenagers themselves have to learn if it is a waste of time rather than being persuaded by adults. They may also try to make up for this lost time and study hard while in their twenties, and it is not too late to start studying. Moreover, teenagers working is harmful because they spend their money on night amusements and it triggers teenage crime. I also think that teenagers should experience for themselves that night amusements are meaningless and should regret to have committed these crimes. In conclusion, there are both good and bad aspects of teenage students having jobs. However, I believe they learn something even from bad experience. Therefore, I conclude that working is a good experience for teenage-students. |