|
| ¥á¡¼¥ë¥Þ¥¬¥¸¥ó ¥µ¥ó¥×¥ë Title: Email Can Not Make Communication between People Stronger Structure: (1) Introduction (2) Email is a good tool to start the communication but it can not develop the communication (3) Conclusion Example: I am connecting with some 600 hundreds of readers through this mail magazine. Email has made it possible to expand the people's network, and people can communicate with strangers whom they have never met before. Moreover, people who live in foreign countries can easily contact with friends or relatives in their home country. However, people should not depend on email too much because it is just a tool to expand or keep communication between people. Only people themselves can deepen or strengthen the communication with others. Email gives people chance to make relationship with others, and should be used as a tool to start or keep the relation. For example, I had not communicated very well with my colleagues in the office before sending email to all the colleagues to ask to participate in a marathon festival with me. It was a chance to start the communication with them, and I have developed it through actual conversation with them. As another example, I have recently sent an email to a teacher in the university, and he replied me. Although it was a good chance to contact with him, it is meaningless unless continuing the relationship. Therefore it is easy to expand the communication with others through emails, but whether they can develop the relation depends on the people themselves. I conclusion, email is so useful that people should use as much as possible to make a chance to expand and to keep communication with others. However, what they need to develop the relation is their communication skills. People always try to develop the skills even if this Internet world. |